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A driftwood Essay

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November 7, 2006
A driftwood Essay by ~BlueHalios is an elegant evocation mixed throughout with some lovely phrases.
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forever and flawless
those un-plucked flowers
pressed in poetry volumes
and the ocean.

oddities of memories
as river stones, well rounded
in their patient education;
as punctuated coffee stains,

those discarded sutras
by accidental monks,
who learned calligraphy from
the rain.

what clever lines
the cipruss roots, embroidered
with lichen ‘nd worm trails.
how fertile those monks are now,

as love is recorded
diligently, in chronicles
of a child stomping in
the rain.
a piece i have been working on, kind of a reflection on life in oregon.


I feel extremely humbled and grateful for the DD, and for all the coments. Thanks for looking at my work and apreciating it, really.
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trappist's avatar
this is beautifully written and i like the imagery at the end :aww: